Hahaha
You've got so much better :D
Hahaha
You've got so much better :D
I Got Some Advice
I think think this is a great track.
However, I do think it's lacking something.
It's too short to really have vocals, but needs them or something else, like, maybe a drop, the riff becoming very clear, instead of distorted, and a heavy and fast beat coming in.
I work with FL9 so I can't advice you on the instrument to use, but a sequence would be good, simply imitating the already given riff.
If you would like to develop your skills more, or would like many more people to hear your work, just send me a tell.
Face of FaceKiller Productions
Nice Piece!
Very Nice, sounds very smooth, flows well.
COuld be better, but hey :)
If you're interested in developing your skills more, send me a message.
Face of FaceKiller Productions
hey thanks! glad you enjoyed it :D
thanks again for the review, 9, and your time listening
Advice
It is quite good, but to make lighter pieces do this:
Shorter notes.
Try not to make the notes clash so much- THAT makes them sound like minors.
Hey!
What's up with the lack of views :S That's not good!
Very good work!
Face of FaceKiller Productions
Full of emotion..
This piece has feeling.
It's sad.
It's not conventional drum bass though. Slightly repetitive too.
Still, you have motivated to try FL again, and work against the lag.
I look forwards to more submissions from you!
I know it's not really drum and bass, but I couldn't quite find a matching genre to this song... Atleast not any genre which's existance I am aware of. If you get my point.
But anyways, thanks for the review and keep up the good work.
---DaMux
You remind me of me...
Except, you're better and more developed than me.
One day, maybe.
You've got me interested in this kind of stuff.
And to think I go around offering help to others :)
Well, if you want to help, instead of being helped by my tea, let me know.
Face of FaceKiller Productions
P.S I would of liked it if your introduced the thunder again at the end, maybe finished with rain fading out :)
Very Lively!
Wow, it's got spirit!
Very exciting beat, cheeky little little riff!
Makes you wanna move.
Glad you added the end part.
No wonder it took so long!
Face of FaceKiller Productions
Pure Griminess
The most pleasant slap in the Face I've ever had.
Face of FaceKiller Productions
I aspire to be as good as you...
Well done! Very good indeed.
Very uplifting yet meaningful track.
Nicely rounded off, very shiny track!
Anthem quality!
Just another role model for me...
Face of FaceKiller Productions
Bye bye FKProductions. Hello Deventas. I'm kind of changing my alias within the same account because, you know, attachments. Deventas Ltd is a software production and media creation company.
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