Good
Yeah I like it, especially the vocals and around 2:00 it gets good.
Slightly repetitive though.
Still, nice work. Keep it up.
Face of FaceKiller Productions
Good
Yeah I like it, especially the vocals and around 2:00 it gets good.
Slightly repetitive though.
Still, nice work. Keep it up.
Face of FaceKiller Productions
Yeah i know it's repetitive but I didn't have any other sounds :D
Next time will be better!
Thank's!
Hey
Nice work, just a bit repetitive but hey. Very vivid and full.
FL9?
I don't want to go through the whole procedure, but if you would like to develop your skills in music then just let me know ;P
Face of FaceKiller Productions
Thank you :D
Yes, I use FL9, but I don't have many interesting vsti plugins.
Of course I want to improve my "skills". I'm just beginner now.
AAAAW YEAH!!
Some may say it's not good enough for these words- but THAT is one dirty beat!
WOW
How can you develop so fast in so many fields!
Well done GRIME!
It felt like I've been listening to it for 5 minutes AFTER 2:10, which by the way, starts off a bit quietly (that part I mean).
Still turn the bpm up 20 more XD.
OR Make the beat faster, or add more kicks or do something to make the beat sound more full.
But, IT"S GREAT!
Length might be a bit OTT, but still.
You could eliminate that by coming up with a slightly different beat 1/2way through, after one of your build ups you do XD
Were those built in plugins by the way? If not WHERE THE HELL DO YOU PUT THEM WHEN YOU DOWNLOAD THEM! Please :P
Yeah, I decided, that riff at the end, make it LOUDER, sounds a bit feeble.
Hope that help, just try to add a bit more energy, but the score says it all.
Face of FaceKiller Productions
WOW ok THANK'S!
I see that you want from me too make a Dn'B, Ok awesome, i'll try to make one:P
Ok plugins:
when you download them you need to go inside of the FL folder > DATA > Patches> Packs > and made a new folder, put there.
Your welcome.
Grime.
Yes!
Congratulations Grime- This is what I've been waiting for, your finally putting diversity into your pieces!
It's great to see.
AND it shows that you yourself are a diverse artist.
Yet, the quality of the sounds you use still doesn't sound .. right! Are you using FL8 or 9? :D
Otherwise, well done. Try picking up the tempo 20 bpm :P
Face of FaceKiller Productions
Happy that your happy :D
I'm using FL9, the sounds are preety HQ to me.
That's Dubstep man, It's half-beat Drum n' Bass, It supposed to be slow!
Nice
I like this a lot, all the instruments used compliment each other.
The only problem is, I think that the synths you use sound quite low quality.
Try using more "Flashy" synths to improve this piece.
Face of FaceKiller Productions
Thank's man !
Acctualy those are HQ sounds, It sounds like low because There were perfect for this song.
Hello
Heh, you remind me of me :)
Very good.
Yeah, the volume of each separate track needs some fiddling with. A few more drops, isolate the riff halfway through for bit, make each note more drawn out then re-introduce the beat, after a build up. On the final drop, introduce a small riff. Nothing fancy, just a little sequence.
That's my advice.
If you like it, you could get more long term help from me. Just send me a message.
Definitely taking this all into account. Thanks very much. Will most likely be in contact!
Nice Piece!
Very Nice, sounds very smooth, flows well.
COuld be better, but hey :)
If you're interested in developing your skills more, send me a message.
Face of FaceKiller Productions
hey thanks! glad you enjoyed it :D
thanks again for the review, 9, and your time listening
Full of emotion..
This piece has feeling.
It's sad.
It's not conventional drum bass though. Slightly repetitive too.
Still, you have motivated to try FL again, and work against the lag.
I look forwards to more submissions from you!
I know it's not really drum and bass, but I couldn't quite find a matching genre to this song... Atleast not any genre which's existance I am aware of. If you get my point.
But anyways, thanks for the review and keep up the good work.
---DaMux
Good...
But didn't you find FL keys? For the lower piano I mean.
And a little echo on the piano would me good.
But the beat is much better.
You're getting there, just practice! Also, if you downloaded the drums as a plugin, can you tell me where to find it ;)
This bit is probably meant to be an inbox message, but now you're part of the team, you can post your work under FKP to get a wider audience.
Face of FaceKiller Productions
P.S The saw is great :)
Cool, Thank's!
And those drum were already inside.
Packs > Vintage
Heheh
It doesn't sound like a remix, it sounds like you've tried to recreate the song, unsuccessfully. But it sounds OK. If the beat was a little more complex, as in it had transitions, then it would be more catchy. Voices aren't too great.
But you said you said you did it when you were bored, so fair enough.
Face of FaceKiller Productions
Yep.. AS you can see this song is really old..
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